Writing with Claude
70 minutes
Module 08
Writing
with Claude
Two roles. One eliminates the “AI voice” problem entirely.
Charter Oak Strategic Partners
Generator vs. Editor.
Generator
Claude creates from scratch. Drafts, outlines, first passes. The output is raw material. Useful for blank page starts, brainstorming, exploring directions.
The result sounds like Claude. Competent, but generic. Fine for internal drafts. Rarely publishable as-is.
Editor
Claude improves what you wrote. Your voice goes in. A cleaner, sharper version comes out. It sounds like you, only better.
The “it sounds like AI” complaint disappears when Claude edits instead of generates.
Generate when you have nothing.
Edit when you have something.
For everything that matters, the answer is almost always: edit.
Live Demo
Three bad pieces.
Three fixes.
The Problem
Six words mean nothing: “leveraging,” “synergies,” “robust,” “pipeline,” “deliverables,” “alignment.” Every sentence contains at least one. The reader finds no information.
The Fix
Direct Claude to strip named jargon, lead with the actual update, and cut to 200 words. The prompt must name what jargon looks like. “Clean it up” changes nothing.
The Problem
A price increase notification buries the change in paragraph four. Three paragraphs of market context come first. The reader has to dig for the one fact that matters.
The Fix
Tell Claude the structure: “The price increase is the news. First sentence. The context is the justification. Put it after.” Structure as instruction.
The Problem
“Robust momentum.” “Secular tailwinds.” “Optimize our go-to-market motion.” The report sounds impressive and communicates nothing. Abstract phrases everywhere.
The Fix
Tell Claude to replace every abstract phrase with a concrete fact or number. “Robust momentum” becomes “revenue grew 12% QoQ.” The rule is explicit and checkable.
The editing prompt must define good.
“Make this better. Clean it up.”
Claude smooths the surface and calls it done. Jargon stays. Buried lede stays.
“Replace every abstract phrase with a specific number or fact.”
Claude has a rule and an example. Applies it across every sentence.
Five steps. Every time.
Draft
Generate or paste your existing text.
Critique
Ask Claude to identify weaknesses. Name them. Do not fix them yet.
Revise
Address each weakness with a specific instruction.
Polish
Fine-tune word choice, rhythm, and precision.
Deliver
Final format check. Headers, spacing, tone consistency.
Diagnose, Then Fix
Each pair receives a badly written piece. First: diagnose what is wrong. Then: write a specific editing prompt that fixes each problem.
Run the prompt. Compare before and after. Share the most impressive transformation with the room.
25 minutes
Debrief
Claude can identify and remove jargon when you name what jargon looks like. It can restructure a document when you define the structure. It can sharpen prose when you give it a specific rule.
The tool does what you ask. Ask precisely.
You can prompt, refine, analyze, and write. Module 09 chains it all together.
The Compound Workflow capstone. Multiple Claude interactions forming a single pipeline. Real output in fifteen minutes.